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The BeastKeith hacked his way through the forest. The Rockies had to be the most irritating place to hike ever created. A combination of underbrush, old leaves, and insects crunched beneath his feet. He turned to his companion, Joseph, and spoke, Dammit, Joe, you had to get us lost, didnt you? Joseph and Keith had been best friends for almost 20 years, since they had been in kindergarten. I did not get us lost, its the GPSs fault.The Beast
Well it was your idea to bring that stupid thing. Shut up It was the middle of June, and the two pals had decided to take a hike, to break from t


AmerikhaYou shield your childrens eyes from that which they will see Silencing things you deem unfit for their precious ears Is this what freedom is?Amerikha
You raise them and talk about America the Beautiful
And fill their heads with lies and unreal expectations So that when they grow up Their dreams are shattered Is that what America is supposed to be?
Indoctrinate them with the Us and them mentality So that they grow up xenophobic And prejudiced against the masses Is that how youre supposed to raise children?
You invade foreig


Freedom of StupidityFreedom is a word which is bandied about quite a lot in our society. Usually this is in the context of do [x action] or terrorists will come and kill you! The problem with this thinking is that it inevitably retracts from our freedoms. Nowadays, the word freedom means blend in, shut up, and do as I say, or you can starve. This is a fundamental problem to a free society, and is in direct conflict with the ideals that the founding fathers stood for when they wrote the founding documents of this nation.Freedom of Stupidity
Individuality is a trait which is supposedly held in high esteem in this culture. There are, ho


Love SongLet's laugh together, forever and ever Until all the stars burn away I want to be with you all of my life, girl 'till angels carry me awayLove Song
The seas cannot stop me, no matter how choppy Nor can all the birds In the sky The reverend may ask us "Till Death do you Part?" But I'll Be with you after I die.
you rock
~Lal
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"What is art? Prostitution." -Charles Baudelaire
He can play the blues like nobody's business.
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I broke up my comments for the different genres you have, and I will sum everything up at the end.
First, Lit. Ok, so two of them are as yet unfinished, but I think you have some good starts there. The one that caught my eye was "Arbitrary", which I found expressive and well written. If these are the beginnings of songs, you're off to a good start!
Drawings are second. You do really well with hands, which I've always had trouble with. Much of the rest is a very basic style, and I'm going to guess by your age that you haven't been drawing seriously for very long. The concepts are good, but you are still needing to work on the technicalities of whichever medium(s) you are wanting to work in. Also, spending some time to develop your personal style will help tremendously as well. I did like your drawings "Lamecaster" and "Black Sunday" as the concepts behind them are good and solid. Once you increase your drawing skills I feel that these are pieces you may want to revisit for makeovers.
As for the photography, I would say that this is currently your best medium. You do have a fair share of snapshot-type photos, but there's nothing wrong with that. As you improve even the snapshots will be above average. The pieces I was especially taken by were "Into the Blue", "The Presence", and "The Ebb and the Flow". These show your promise in this medium. The only thing is that you may want to become a little bolder with your cropping, which I suggested on "Ebb and Flow". The panoramas are awesome though!
I can see your sense of humor showing through in many of these, and that is an area you may want to delve further into, especially with the photography. Overall, I see a lot of potential once the more technical obstacles are overcome.
I hope that this helps you, and that you continue to perfect yourself!
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